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A poem I wrote Just a little something

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Posted 07 December 2009 - 08:15 AM

I live for the blood dripping From my veins,
From the black coffin that I lay in,
For the dark raining night when I let my tears of sorrow join the rain,
For the games of Russian Roulette with only one blank,
For the years of torture spent on the path paved by the lonely souls of those brave enough to light a match and let if fall into the pool of gasoline around them and as they go into an everlasting slumber,
And for the day that I may join those individuals.
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Posted 19 January 2010 - 10:26 PM

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Posted 20 January 2010 - 10:35 AM

Less Core More Gore \m/ haha jk nice poem i guess.....
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Posted 20 January 2010 - 02:49 PM

I would just like to say that this poem sounded very emo.

No offense, just stating my opinion :)
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Posted 20 January 2010 - 07:27 PM

I agree with crono haha


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Posted 21 January 2010 - 07:18 AM

eh so ive heard lol.
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Posted 21 January 2010 - 03:35 PM

i thought it sounded a little mobster-ish.
The Last Enemy That Shall Be Destroyed
And You Will Know the Truth, And The Truth Will Set You Free
I heard a voice in the midst of the four beasts, And I looked and behold: a pale horse. And his name, that sat on him, was Death. And Hell followed with him.
Whoever is unjust, let him be unjust still. Whoever is righteous, let him be righteous still. Whoever is filthy, let him be filthy still. Listen to the words long written down.http://www.copadorer...es%20around.mp3
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Posted 21 January 2010 - 04:19 PM

mobster-ish?
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Posted 21 January 2010 - 04:46 PM

yeah, it sounded like a mobster made that poem.....
The Last Enemy That Shall Be Destroyed
And You Will Know the Truth, And The Truth Will Set You Free
I heard a voice in the midst of the four beasts, And I looked and behold: a pale horse. And his name, that sat on him, was Death. And Hell followed with him.
Whoever is unjust, let him be unjust still. Whoever is righteous, let him be righteous still. Whoever is filthy, let him be filthy still. Listen to the words long written down.http://www.copadorer...es%20around.mp3
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Posted 02 February 2010 - 02:51 AM

im no mobster lol.
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Posted 02 February 2010 - 06:12 AM

Very morbid but very good. I commend you Sir. I am not one prone to poetry but that was an excellent display of writing.

Not many people have the tenacity to post something like that and that is what makes it even better.
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Posted 07 February 2010 - 02:57 PM

Honestly, trying too hard. Way too hard.

To the point where I believe it was intentional.
My children have no dreams
They live a Maybe Life

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Posted 10 March 2010 - 07:04 AM

I thank you for all yalls comments, especially Retromonkey; i thank you sir.
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Posted 10 March 2010 - 01:08 PM

I charge 20 bucks a comment so yea... Pay up
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Posted 10 March 2010 - 02:26 PM

well im not payi- damn there goes 60 bucks down the drain....
also the whole mobster thing wasn't with bad intentions..... mobsters can be cool, especially in movies lol.
The Last Enemy That Shall Be Destroyed
And You Will Know the Truth, And The Truth Will Set You Free
I heard a voice in the midst of the four beasts, And I looked and behold: a pale horse. And his name, that sat on him, was Death. And Hell followed with him.
Whoever is unjust, let him be unjust still. Whoever is righteous, let him be righteous still. Whoever is filthy, let him be filthy still. Listen to the words long written down.http://www.copadorer...es%20around.mp3
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